We Made It

 

by Isabella Kam Chin Yau 6D

 
 

“YouTube again! What’s going on Chris? You should be doing your homework!" yelled Chis’s Mum, shutting the bedroom door.

Chris rolled his eyes.

“How wonderful will it be if I can go out and meet Ted,” he imagined. "While he was looking at the window, planning to sneak out, a magical door appeared outside.

“Maybe... I can SNEAK OUT!"

“Come to my house. Hurry!” he telephoned Ted immediately.

Ted stepped in Chris’s garden, and saw the door.

Then, he noticed Chris waving through the window. He ran to it and assisted Chris to climb out.

"Is the wooden door, the one in your garden, new?"asked Ted curiously.

“I just saw it this morning. It’s extremely strange. Let's go inside, I want to go on an adventure.” said Chris.

“But… I am… not allowed to do this, you too. Plus, it may not be safe.” Ted considered.

“I’m not allowed to sneak out too! There is nothing to worry about,” Chris whispered.

Ted trusted Chris and they hopped in the door.

“BOOM!" Ted and Chris transferred into another room. They looked around. It was empty and tiny.

Words are written on the wall with chalk: WELCOME TO THE GAME. You have to find the door in every room to escape. If you escape in time, you will win a prize, or else you will die. GOOD LUCK!

“Umm…wish us good luck.” Chris crossed his fingers.

The timer had started. There were forty minutes for them to find. Only three minutes had passed, and they had already found the first door.

The coming rooms are also effortless. They found the doors very easily.

“This isn’t hard at all!" said Chris proudly.

It was the sixth room. This time, the room was colourful, playful and full of stuffed toys. Chris and Ted moved all the stuffed toys away. But they couldn’t find the door. It was harder. Time was taking, fifteen minutes were left.

“Oh no! We spent twenty minutes here.” Chris panicked.

Tears were rolling inside his eyes.

“Our work will pay off. Don’t give up.”Ted comforted Chris.

Ted looked at the pile of toys. Something was glowing inside.

“Huh?” he said and took a closer look, ”A door, Chris!”

Chris got up and smiled.

The coming rooms were a bit difficult, but they believed their hard work would pay off, so they found all the doors.

In the last two minutes, they found a door with a board on top, writing the word “Victory”. They were thrilled, like crazy. And went inside.

Two tall people with masks and black suits were in the room, holding a party popper.

“You beat the game. These two iPhones are for you. You can now escape.” said one of them.

“Yuppie!“ They got the prize and escaped. “What a great adventure!”

They were back in the garde, and said goodbye.

“Look, Mommy,” Chris got home, holding his new phone.”Uh oh…sorry…”

He was worried.

“YOU SNUCK OUT!” she roared, ”Don’t run away!”

PCPS