The Interesting Invention (HKYWA 2024)
by Samuel Wong Tsz Him 6E
This short story was written for the Hong Kong Young Writer’s Awards 2024. This year’s theme was “New Tales of China’s Inventions”. Students were allowed to write about the old and new Chinese inventions everyone uses today!
The great Emperor Liao Gui was a wise and just ruler, known throughout his kingdom for his compassion and leadership. He had always been preoccupied with thoughts of how to safeguard his kingdom from external threats, and this was a constant concern that occupied his mind.
The vicious emperor sat on his throne, lost in contemplation, stroking his chin, his red and golden robes flowing across the floor. He was interrupted by a knock on the door. "Who is it?" he inquired, his voice echoing through the throne room.
"Your Majesty, a wise monk by the name of Li Tian, desires to speak with you," replied one of his servants.
The emperor was intrigued. He had heard of Li Tian's reputation for his great wisdom, and he was eager to hear what advice the monk had to offer. "Bring him to me," commanded the emperor in an authoritative tone.
After a few moments, the monk arrived in the throne room and greeted Emperor Liao Gui with a bow. "Greetings, Your Majesty. I have come here to offer you my guidance in ruling the country," he said respectfully.
The monk's aura of serenity and his gentle speech captivated the emperor. "You have my attention," replied the emperor, his voice tinged with curiosity.
Li Tian began to share stories of his travels and the knowledge he had accumulated over the years. He spoke of the Silk Road, his love for freedom, and the importance of living in harmony with one's surroundings.
The emperor was entranced by the monk's tales, and he listened attentively to every word. He was struck by the simplicity of Li Tian's wisdom and the profound insights it contained.
"Your Majesty, during my travels, I came across a remarkable invention that could change the course of history," said Li Tian.
"What is this invention?" asked the emperor inquisitively.
"It is called gunpowder," replied Li Tian. "It has the potential to dominate warfare and bring great power to protect the kingdom."
Emperor Liao Gui's eyes shone with excitement, "Gunpowder? Do tell me more about this substance," he said eagerly.
Li Tian pulled out a cylinder and lit it with a candle and there was a little explosion. Li Tian elaborated on how gunpowder could create explosive reactions when ignited and said, “When it is ignited, you’ll see its potential use in warfare.”
The emperor saw the immense value in this invention and immediately ordered Li Tian to work with his alchemists to unleash the power of gunpowder.
Months went by, and Li Tian and the alchemists worked tirelessly to refine the composition of gunpowder and discover its various applications.
"Your Majesty, we have made a breakthrough," said Li Tian one day. "We have discovered that adding sulphur and charcoal into the mixture increases its explosive power."
Emperor Liao Gui was overjoyed with the results, "This is incredible! We must share this knowledge with the world," he exclaimed.
And so, fireworks were created to celebrate the discovery of this new invention. News of this incredible invention spread far and wide, and Emperor Liao Gui's kingdom became renowned for its advancements in science and technology.
However, the emperor's mind was not solely focused on the power of gunpowder. He was also deeply concerned with the welfare of his people, and he sought to implement policies that would improve their lives.
Under his leadership, the Song dynasty flourished. He invested heavily in education, building schools and universities that taught the latest scientific and philosophical ideas. He encouraged trade and commerce, creating new markets and opportunities for his people.
But he also remained humble and compassionate, never forgetting the importance of kindness and empathy. He often met with the common people, listening to their concerns and offering assistance wherever possible.
As the years went by, Emperor Liao Gui became known as one of the greatest rulers in history. His kingdom prospered, his people were happy and content, wealthy and smart and all revered his wisdom and leadership.
And though he had achieved so much, he remained humble and grateful, always mindful of the lessons he had learned from the wise monk Li Tian. In the end, it was not the power of gunpowder or the wealth of his kingdom that defined him, but the kindness and compassion he showed to all those around him. As for Li Tian, he went back to the mountains and was never seen again.